A Sam Wick Thriller
"Come on, Jake, it's not that bad too. (Delete the word too).
"No, sir," Alisha spoke. Jake just nodded. (Nodding generally means ‘yes’. So does Jake need something from his desk?)
Loved the story so far.
I need my next fix
More, please!
"Come on, Jake, it's not that bad too. (Delete the word too).
"No, sir," Alisha spoke. Jake just nodded. (Nodding generally means ‘yes’. So does Jake need something from his desk?)
Loved the story so far.
I need my next fix
More, please!