Wicked Target [Chapter 2]

[Hope Gerhardstein]

"Come on, Jake, it's not that bad too. (Delete the word too).

"No, sir," Alisha spoke. Jake just nodded. (Nodding generally means ‘yes’. So does Jake need something from his desk?)

[Adele Embrey]

Loved the story so far.

[Thomas Rowley]

I need my next fix

[Chase Austin]

Wednesday 11 AM ET

[S Mc]

More, please!