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Hope Gerhardstein's avatar

"Come on, Jake, it's not that bad too. (Delete the word too).

"No, sir," Alisha spoke. Jake just nodded. (Nodding generally means ‘yes’. So does Jake need something from his desk?)

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Adele Embrey's avatar

Loved the story so far.

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