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Short but ratcheting up the tension already so you wil be impatiently awaiting the next bit!

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Short but it draws you in.

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This chapter seemed shorter that chapter 2

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without waiting to see if Alisha and Jake had picked her instructions. (Picked?)

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I am so hooked love it

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Very good.. Much better 3 chapters. Keep it up.

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