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Pat Manfield's avatar

Short but ratcheting up the tension already so you wil be impatiently awaiting the next bit!

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S Mc's avatar

Short but it draws you in.

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Adele Embrey's avatar

This chapter seemed shorter that chapter 2

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Hope Gerhardstein's avatar

without waiting to see if Alisha and Jake had picked her instructions. (Picked?)

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Pay's avatar

I am so hooked love it

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Richard McAnally's avatar

Very good.. Much better 3 chapters. Keep it up.

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